Awesome poet over at Andys Merdon agreed to participate in my interactive poetry this week! The words they gave me were (Casual, Minds, Pleasure) and heres what I came up with!
Insomnia
I wish I could take a nap
It would bring me such pleasure
But I can never quite bridge the gap
Into sleep, so I guess I’ll never
Be able to rest my mind
If I am wide awake
So im in a bit of a bind
And my eyes are starting to ache
I really want to go to sleep
But I just cant
I’ve tried counting sheep
I could rant
All day about how I envy
Those who can sleep casually
But that wont make my eyes heavy
Sleep just won’t come naturally
I just want to go to bed
Im starting to feel ill
If this keeps up I might end up dead
Guess i’ll just take some nyquil
Take heart… soon you’ll have a meditation technique that will help! 😉
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I just really wanted a nap this morning lol
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Well done, as usual. Hey, I think I’m behind in the game–will you give me some words? And here are some for you: castanet, ballistic, aquamarine, town. Have a great day!
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Ooh castanet – im going to have to look that one up lol. And absolutely here are some words for you – (Rain, Time, Night, and Noise)
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Perfect words for me–thanks!! And castanets are those wonderful clicking woods that Spanish dancers use…
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Nice one , I must say it is this insomnia which made me write certain works .Lack of sleep, anxiety , depression , a pen and a paper , well, that is more than what I need.A man who has ‘creativity’ will of course find it difficult to sleep, his brain won’t shut down that much easily , You will always be swimming in the ocean of thoughts and ideas , 🙂 That is what I have experienced.
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All of what you just said is so true for me.
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Sweet. Nice work Dom. I’m fortunate enough to be able to sleep on a pile of rock if need be 🙂 Sleep well.
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Haha well color me jealous sir.
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So true. I am a chronic insomniac and can really relate to this. It somehow sucks more when I cant even take a nap than when I cant sleep at night!
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The worst part for me is when I ever actually manage to take a nap. I wake up feeling worse than I did before.
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